Shots From Our Fragmented Shots

Naomi

Storyline

Scene one - models getting ready for casting backstage
shots - hair, makeup, getting dressed, heels, clothes (fragmented shots)

Scene two - Director walks and places casting list called 'masterplan' on the wall.

Scene three - Models rush in their heels to see cast list names. excitement/disappointment in the air, new model is congratulated, old model stands and stares blankly at her - turns her back and walks away, can hear tick tock of her heels against the corridor floor.

Shot one - one model girl wearing read lipstick shouts through megaphone "all the models to the floor right now" and drum with glitter vibrating on surface. - fast shutter effect. 

clips - Kanye Performance

scene four - models walking down catwalk, catwalk shots from different angles.


clips - Kanye Performance

scene five - flash forward to new model dressed in white owning the catwalk.retrospective photography; flash backs of old model being head of her game, dressed in black and owning the show. 

Scene six - old model smiling and laughing in her hayday wearing red lipstickwith pearls wrapped around her fingers which morphs (Edit technique - crosscut) into a hand full of pills and the present scenraio.


Scene seven - MODEL BEHAVIOUR SHOTS - model reading elle/vogue backstage.

Scene eight - Levan streetdance performance

Middle:

Scene nine - MODEL BEHAVIOUR SHOTS - Model walking eating hamburger and walking down catwalk. Cheeky.

Scene ten - Model crying in a mirror (present day old model) walks out of casting onto street to off licence to buy bottle of whisky. Hood up, going to drown sorrows in a bottle.

MAJOR ENDING:

Scene eleven - stands on street corner. flashforward to new model laughing and joking with models backstage.

scene twelve - walks down catwalk drunk and tears streamingg down face, dirty and muddy, collapses at end of stage.

Lip Syncing Test Shot

DigiPak Draft

Here is one of the drafts of our Digipak we asked for feedback and most of them said that the italics on the left hand corner were very hard to read. We were hoping to find some kind of solution to this such as adding a background to make it clearer or trying different fonts.

Here we tried with a faded background and the font a little clearer but not much and we felt this just didn't fit in with our front cover as a whole.

We wanted to add a bar code and the label Kanye West is signed to, to make it more realistic. We feel we should move then label icon as this is not very clear and very hard to read in the bottom right hand corner.

Here i feel that the sign is much more clearer i feel and look more professional.

Questionaire Feedback

To test the target audeince for both we will carry out a questionnaire on ten members of the class...

The questions we have included are:

-Age
1 x 21-25 year old
2 x 18-20 year olds
6 x 15-17 year olds

-Gender
8 x female
2 x male

-Do you like R&B music?
5 x yes
5 x no

-Do you think R&B music is aimed at men or women?
4 x men
3 x both
3 x women

-Do you like Kanye West
7 x no
3 x yes

-What is your favourite Kanye West music video?
2 x stronger
1x touch the sky

-Would you expect to see him in his videos?
10 x yes

-What do you think is Kanye West's strongest icon?
1 x coats
5 x sunglasses
1 x teeth